Friday, October 9, 2009
The Law of Unintended Consequences
A patchwork of forgotten hours,
gray squares next to deep rich red.
He’s barely stitched together, now,
but the squares will merge
to make one glorious pattern
woven of the many ways
he first killed more than his choices,
and then rediscovered
the colors of his life.
In one corner of the fabric
is woven a dreadful error –
it’s handmade, like a Persian rug,
and the inconsistencies
prove it.
It’s a cluster of stars and
garish lights against the dark,
a constellation of confusion,
the black border
between before and after.
Now asking every morning
for forgiveness,
he pulls the quilt up high
beneath his chin,
knowing we’re all guiltier
than we’d like to think, and that
staying under cover
doesn’t help.
And so he rises
to greet the unknown
of the day.
Note: Dedicated to a humble young man who teaches others how important it is to own our own stuff.
Lost in Translation
We’re running out of metaphors.
For night, black, darkness—
caliginosity is a synonym,
but oh, so nonpoetic.
God forbid you try
a flower or a storm,
even if you get specific.
Oh, it’s all been done.
Try translating from another language,
when the right phrase can't be said.
Personal pain is trite,
and insignificant compared
to that of others.
C’mon, there was a Holocaust,
and genocide’s not dead.
American kids go hungry.
All we can search for
is a better word
for hope.
There are only eight notes in a scale,
and they’ve all been played.
Is there a term for
slowing our rhythm to
one minute at a time?
By Lisa E. Paige © 2009
When writing this poem I thought of teenage angst, my Philosophy of the Mind course in college, and The Anxiety of Influence, by Harold Bloom. I recently read a poem in The Atlantic that directly refered to four great American poets -- no subtle allusions, even. Everyone writes one like that, and I did, once, too. A poet has to let go of feeling unoriginal, or will never write one word.
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